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Open Poetry #43

Answers I Need To Find

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-08-28 11:48 AM

Answers I Need To Find

Your silence tells me nothing
It had made no sense
I wonder did you ever love me
Or was it just pretense

Your silence was unexplained
What happened to you
You would have been in touch
If your words were true

Your silence I never expected
I wonder why obviously
Promises you would not break
If you did truly love me

Your silence left me to ponder
Thoughts on my mind
Was it love or was it pretense
Answers I need to find

Your silence from so far away
Here the horizon I view
Although we are oceans apart
I shall always love you

Hope ©2008

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-08-28 12:04 PM

Dear Hope, you gift us with such elegance ... in words and picture!!

I understand your need to know, but I would say do not doubt what was once expressed and felt. Maybe it is just a sign of a certain immaturity in coping with problems in a relationship.

Dear Hope, you are such a beautiful woman with such a generous heart, may you heal quickly and live in the now with all the new opportunities to share and receive love.

You write so beautifully!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2008-08-28 12:36 PM

Closure can sometimes be more elusive than the love itself. Some very honest and warranted questions you have posed here. I very much enjoyed reading this and the format was appreciated as well.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

3 posted 2008-08-28 10:05 PM

ahh yes thoughts and feelings I have known oh so well, well said, Hope

MsMelissaMae
Junior Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 26
Indianola, Iowa

4 posted 2008-08-29 12:11 PM

You have portrayed my biggest fear in this poem, and every verse has its own edge of what pain not knowing causes.....it was so very well written.

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