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Dark Stranger
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West Coast

0 posted 2008-08-28 06:26 AM



you would dress for the weather of our dreams
and it was always summer there
which was a blessing to my eyes
how your skin would shiver
and you would put on my arms

and giggle a little kind of invitation
that left your heart exposed
just under that one button
that I covered with my hand
and you always moved it aside

said you didn't mind my eyes
looking there between your beginning
and what you hoped would be
the perfect ending to our love story
and would I mind reading it aloud

while you covered your ears with imagination
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-08-28 06:45 AM


Gasp! I think your poems have a rejuvenating effect, because they bring smiles and heart emotions. A D. poem per day, better even if read aloud ... that's the cure!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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2 posted 2008-08-28 08:45 AM


beautiful post, lovely read, doesnt seem to match the name and "face" you represent yourself as dark stranger, quite a paradox, loved the read
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-08-28 09:18 AM


Ms mar, thank you lady love for your eyes here.


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Ken. Thank you so much, and being a "pair of ducks" is not always a bad thing.

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-28-2008 10:31 AM).]

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-08-28 11:19 AM


I love the state Montana, it looks so beautiful and just breath taking

Enjoyed the Write Dark Stranger!!!!


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5 posted 2008-08-28 11:29 AM


"how your skin would shiver
and you would put on my arms

and giggle a little kind of invitation
that left your heart exposed"



yeah, this is cool stuff mister

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-08-28 12:28 PM


A/W thanks so much for the read


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Ms suesea thanks babe you make me smile

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

7 posted 2008-08-28 04:25 PM


like turkish coffee
thick, dark, you are to be sipped,
fortune in a cup.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-08-28 04:45 PM


ms indi..if you would savor me
I would solicit you slowly on purpose
thank you babe

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