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Should I ?

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Dark Star
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0 posted 08-27-2008 03:09 PM       View Profile for Dark Star   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Star




Should I?

Should I given into to temptation
with my love

Fall into their gaze
love them for ever

Should I eat the apple
of lovers lust

Should I?



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Margherita
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1 posted 08-28-2008 04:56 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Seduction is a great part of our life I think!
Follow your heart and you'll know the answer to your question.
Dare to love!

Enjoyed this.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

martiniat8
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Marg, not sure I agree with you here. Perhaps not seduction, the apple is often used to symbolize knowledge, not neccessarrily carnal pleasure
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There is also seduction of spirit no doubt  and it is equally pleasurable, I would say ...

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4 posted 08-28-2008 11:21 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

I would  think that the apple represents temptation! Wanting to have it, but the risks that you would be taking. I don't think the apple in this is based on Knowledge

Enjoyed the Write


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thank you all
 
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