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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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I am barefeet painted toenails most days but tonight it's stockings and high heels perfumed places you'll eagerly discover soft bits waiting for caress lace covering skin then slipped away over shoulders and thighs silken veils under henna colored candles shadows dance upon the blue wall having no shame in what they are about to do |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very senuous poem dear Tina, enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A perfect ending, Tina. |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
PRRRRRRRR! well done. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
well written |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tina, Sounds very illicit and wonderful. Love the sensuous side of your poetry. A |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
A nice piece of gentle erotica |
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