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My Sky |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
The blissful exotic sky captures my eye. I see the creative brilliance; the orange shine of resilience. The clouds form to greet my arrival. It’s so perfect, I must be in denial. God’s hand reaches out, from the unknown abyss. The sea of atmospheric radiance will soon be missed. The night has just entered my mind. Glorious galaxies capture my time. A star shoots across the dark. Random cosmic events make their mark. I think I just saw the Big Dipper in outer space. The Milky Way is my galactic taste. Billions upon billions of solar systems extend through infinity. I feel very enlightened by my own stupidity. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We do feel small when we open our eyes to the infinite vastness of Universe ... Love your sky. Beautiful! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
very cute, love the last line. I always love poems about stars! |
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hiddenIntheDark Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 20 |
wow i think this is really beautiful!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Newpoet, This is coming right along. Bobby |
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MsMelissaMae Junior Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 26Indianola, Iowa |
I enjoyed your poem very much, it had such a catchy little flow to it!  |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Enjoyed |
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