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Open Poetry #43

watersongs of sulanna

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-08-26 05:51 AM

I am the small white stone
and you are the river
with wanting for sooth

there are the trees
that you wear as your gown
when just the shimmer of you

plays in the laughter of sun
and there are mountains
that you have slept with

but left before dawn on occasion
for something else deeper
down below their suggestions

I am the small white stone
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daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-08-26 05:59 AM

I so love little white stones, I collect them! So with this one you made me smile, because of my own personal visions ...

Besides that, dear D., your words never fail to bring awe, for their intrinsic and emotion filled beauty.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2008-08-26 07:56 AM

Such sensuality in the way you express this.
Always a pleasure to read you.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-08-26 09:48 AM

Ms mar, thanks for picking up the small stones with your mind.

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Diamond one, thank you so much

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2008-08-26 10:11 AM

Always a pleasure to find one of you gems. I enjoyed not only the visuals, but the song ...... " very impressive".

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-08-26 12:48 PM

Friend Mark. Thanks so much guy for blessing my penspatter with a glance.

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

6 posted 2008-08-26 02:49 PM

over centuries
wind and water shape mountains
into little stones.

But they are always mountains at heart...

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-08-26 03:09 PM

Ms indi

They say from the love of a small stone for a morning sky, mountains were birthed.

I like your idea of trying to wear it out better.

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