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CrazyHorse
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since 2008-08-23
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New-Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2008-08-25 07:17 PM


Can you point me in the right direction
Without getting lost yourself?
Maybe we've got too many places to go
Before we stop wearing the same pair of shoes

At the same time

But there are trails behind us that lead us to two places
One of them I know is what I want
I don't care about the other
But that's where you're going

Thank me later

This is a stream of conscience
This is a river of pride
This is an acknowledgement of your appreciation
This is me taking my side

You better write this down

I keep forgetting to remember there's a set of teeth behind each kiss
I keep forgetting there are teeth behind each kiss
I keep forgetting teeth behind each kiss
I keep forgetting each kiss

I keep forgetting each kiss?

But there are still stars in the sky that burn white-hot for you
I would draw a line linking each one
But what would be the use?
A line starts and ends

What kind of message would that give you?


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