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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-08-25 09:14 AM



they are four pieces but have a single soul

Mist

Morning mist on hills
Seems things don’t exist if,
I have not seen them.

MistII

The place you have not
searched yet is the place it is,
the mist of belief.

Mist in eyes

The walls conjure
the souls of memory on
your every touch.

Return

The returns to home
many a times end in soul.
It is so distant!



clever talks delay friendship!

[This message has been edited by poddarku (08-25-2008 11:32 AM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-08-25 09:40 AM


Very captivating landscapes of the soul.
Beautiful, dear Ku!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-08-25 02:11 PM


These are each stunning diamond dewdrops in their own right and also as part of the beautiful whole jewel!  

- Owl

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2008-08-25 03:39 PM


All very wonderful, Mist II is my favorite.
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