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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-08-24 08:40 PM


Rapid succession

Truly immersed

Internal professing

Completing the versed


Catching mere thought

Glimpse of a sigh

Tangibly caught

Questioning why


End of beginning

Starting as finished

Soul rendered penning

Heart full replenished...
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-08-25 06:38 AM


Sounds good to my ears, dear Vic.

Lovely.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-08-25 08:56 AM


"Soul rendered penning" ~ indeed! And rendered succinctly but ever so effectively.

"Heart full replenished." ~


EA

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2008-08-26 02:06 PM


Enjoyed the read, Vic!

Helen

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