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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2008-08-23 06:22 PM



Puzzle patterns invite curious feet
to follow the grey slate stones
of the sculpted yet meandering pathway
from curb sidewalk to latticed front porch.
Black-eyed Susans and brilliant red and purple Salvias
stand erect near flowing clumps of fragrant white Alyssum,
which sweetens the air when gentle breezes blow.
An ever-cheerful sunny Coreopsis smiles
near a sweetly scented English Lavender
as a majestic pink Bearded Tongue
joyfully attracts wayward hummingbirds.
Pastel pink Petunias and dazzling Ruby Begonias
sit at the base of 40 year old proud Yews,
standing like sentries on either side of the porch steps.
Balloon flowers pop up next to a fast-growing creeping Thyme
and a coy but eye-catching cobalt blue Lobelia,
all seem subdued by a whimsical Stonehenge-like formation
that invites one to ponder past and present.
A nearby Azalea elegantly keeps to herself.
Aromatic Rosemary complements French Lavender,
while soft gray Sage and pale green Basil
cuddle together near some wandering Mints.
Yellow and burgundy Chrysanthemums
find themselves scattered here and there,
as do clumps of Iris and Fern.
Assorted ‘free’ bloomers (weeds to some)
fill in the empty spaces
with their own palette choices.
Rounding it all out
are a myriad of crawling and flying things
who seem convinced
this paradise was designed for them.
They'll get no argument
from me.


© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-08-23 06:37 PM


grand-fine Nature (and 'landscaping') write!

v. serious and long-sustained applause!!

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-08-24 12:46 PM


Sounds like heaven to me.
                    Ida

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3 posted 2008-08-24 01:15 AM


What a wonderful way to wake up this Sunday morning, Kacy!  I am going to remember the title of this poem for as long as I can, so that when things are too stressed in my life, I can escape into this beautiful garden corner which is a reminder that it is so possible for God and Man to sing the same song.

This macrocosmic concept blends with its microcosmic elements to form a midicosmic masterpiece!  W B Yeats would agree that this, too, is a place where "peace comes dropping slow"!  Thank you for giving birth to this flower-scented haven, Kacy.

- Owl

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4 posted 2008-08-24 02:44 AM


Kacy,

A garden of aromas and clashing colors - that is in my mind from reading this poem.  Oh, I do so love Rosemary and Lavendar and Basil and Loebelia.  I love it all - and I want to grow Peonies!

Beautiful, my friend.  Just beautiful.  Oh and the 'acrid perfume' poem I wrote.  I was thinking you would know exactly what I meant as I posted it.

xoxoxo
Alison

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5 posted 2008-08-25 02:25 PM


Bruce, Ida, Di, Ali:
Thanks for visiting the garden puzzle path.
I'm having fun putting this yardscape together!
It really is growing like a puzzle, especially the walkway.
A new ornamental maple tree will be added this fall, and hopefully a waterfall, Zen meditation bench,
koi pond and modestly small vegetable garden next spring.

How can one go wrong when creating a customized mini-paradise? I heartily encourage everyone to do this, whether it's indoors, on a deck or patio with pots, a standard city yard, or acreage!

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6 posted 2008-08-25 04:17 PM


I love this write so very much, Midnitesun! What a fine, fine world you have created, and thank you for inviting us in!
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7 posted 2008-08-26 11:22 AM


ArtSolstice! Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read and comment! Your visits are greatly appreciated!!!
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8 posted 2008-08-26 04:24 PM


Thank you, dear Kacy, for this exquisite view of your garden. I feel wrapped in Summer's luscious gifts and scents.
Wonderful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

OwlSA
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9 posted 2008-08-26 06:57 PM


Kacy, I hope there will be more poems about it, as it grows, but if so, please let us know - either from the title or a note - that it is about this Puzzle Path garden.  It would be lovely to read them in sequence.  

Please more Sassy the squirrel poems, too.

- Owl

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10 posted 2008-08-28 10:33 AM


as a majestic pink Bearded Tongue
joyfully attracts wayward hummingbirds

LOVE those lines!!!

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11 posted 2008-08-29 01:30 AM


I enjoyed this very much I could 'see' exactly what you were describing... I've taken a liking to flowers in recent years; thanks for the trip down the puzzle path
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12 posted 2008-08-30 11:38 AM


good read
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13 posted 2008-08-30 12:22 PM


A garden is the greatest free show on earth; yes I am aware that there are often hours of back-breaking effort to get it looking just right but the best gardens seem to give the impression that they just 'happened' with no effort at all. This is a splendid read and worth reading again and again.

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14 posted 2008-09-02 07:22 PM


just visiting this 'colorful' and refreshing 'penning' once more!

continued applause!

Midnitesun
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15 posted 2008-09-02 07:29 PM


Thank you friends, for hanging out in my garden and stepping onto the puzzle path.
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