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Rocky
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0 posted 2008-08-23 01:59 PM



    I reside somewhere deep deep within the corner of your soul.
                         I am in complete control of you.
    if I wanted to I could destroy your heart and or eat you whole,
                         but that's not what I want to do.
                       what I want to do is make you see    
   that your girlfriend was not meant for you but was meant for me.
                      I love your girlfriend cannot you see.
          you are my chattel and will be who I want you to be.
                    I love your girlfriend with all of my heart.
                    I will have what I wanted from the start.


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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2008-08-24 03:24 AM


You know, maybe you are simply coveting what is not meant to be 'yours'.  Maybe she is perfectly happy with the other guy and would hate you for thinking of her like some pawn in a game of power.  Maybe you need to step back and take some down time from what could seem to be an obsession - no person is owned.  If she wants to be with this other person, accept it.  Personally, I would find it offensive that you seem to think that she has no say in who she is with.

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2 posted 2008-08-24 12:38 PM


Perhaps your problem lies in the fact that intelligent, worthwhile women do not care to be thought of as "chattels." So twentieth
century, you know.
                                        Ida

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