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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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putting on your morning smile like that loose fitting shirt with no buttons remaining anymore that fits us both better than others something about the wrinkles seem to find places on our skin that makes us feel each other with our eyes closed automatically and some secrets under neath perhaps like stains we would keep and never let them be laundered as if living for the discolorations was the only real measurement of love __________________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and never let them be laundered as if living for the discolorations was the only real measurement of love I think that this is one of your most tender writes, dear D., one to cherish and read certainly more than once. No doubt the pleasure in inhaling the scent of the beloved on his/her clothings and the wish of never washing it out IS a wonderful measurement of love.  Thank you for blessing us yet again with your outstanding, unique renderings of your visions of love. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady love for your gentle touch to my humble words |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
when past life touches tug with inkwell braid surprise we gasp, turn and smile. You are unpressed linen against my skin, D... Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...wet me now and let me cling to the curve of your mind smile sides, thanks babe |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Your poetry whispers softly in my ear. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Oh this is so true. Thanks for the write, inspires me to be who I am and accept that life is made of more than smooth skin. Lis |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Lis...the skin of life is always smooth when worshiped and polished...without that it is a bit rough, but still smooth to the eyes of strangers..thanks babe |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you ooze with the smoothes on the edges of your ruff ruff and i'm dizzy spinning in cycles of wash and dry |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms inki, please never dry without hanging over my line slowly. Thanks babe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoying the responses just as much as what precipitated them.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms sunnyone. Thank you babe. Grins |
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