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DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2008-08-22 07:32 PM

thanks to all that replied to my poems for their warm words, and for their helpful advices.

Sunset

Wiseman James
lit up a cigarette
he wants to think
about today

sunset is there over the horizon
watching him think
to help him out

Wiseman James
thinks about dreams
subject he does not understand very well

although he never remembers
what he dreams about
and although he believes he does not dream
he still tries everynight
both to dream and to remember

while smoking he realized
that maybe dreams
were not made for him

but he promised to himself
under the sunset's light
to keep trying

maybe just maybe
he will finally dream
and finally he will have
a dream to follow

under the sunset's watch
Wiseman James got up
and started walking again
he lit up yet another cigarette
for the road
and wondered
if he dreamt tonight
what would it be about?
although he is wise
he is completely new
on the dreaming subject

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-08-22 08:21 PM

Yo DreamerSpirit,

Many wise people don't dream. Dreaming can be a problem.

Bobby

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

2 posted 2008-08-23 04:37 AM

sometimes Bobby, Dreaming is the essence of Wisdom, i think that there is a balance in this subject, its wise not to dream too much, so your feet will remain on earth, but also it's good to dream because then you'll know what lies up there, in the skies.

Denis.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-08-23 09:12 AM

Dear Denis, I love this subject and you developed it well! I am a dreamer, day - and night dreamer! My motto is "keeping my feet firmly in the air"

I have had some truly extraordinary dreams.

Your wise James will learn to appreciate dreams. In dreams many an answer can surprise us and many a longing is satisfied.
Many great scientists found answers to their questions in dreams!

Oh, and rest assured that Divine Spirit too speaks to us!

Enjoyed your take on this.

Sin sueños la vida parece vanìa ... puede ser tambien que la vida es un sueño ...

Love,
Margherita

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