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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-08-22 04:22 PM


It’s winter,
and the wind is howling
over Bone’s and his Mom’s
row.  

The temperature’s dropped
into the twenties.  

Bones and Mom don’t have
any money for heat.  

There is one thing nice
about Philadelphia row houses
with thin walls.  

If your house
is in the middle of the row,
you can share
some of your neighbor’s heat.  

It comes through the walls.  

The temperature
never drops
below freezing.  

If you bundle up real good with clothes,
and lay next to a wall,
you can sometimes get a little sleep.  

Yeah, it’s frightening
just thinking about it.

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-08-23 03:05 AM


You are so right, I remember some pretty cold, bleak winters growing up.
                                Ida

DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
2 posted 2008-08-23 04:34 AM


enjoyed this one very much  bobby.
as always Bones leaves me a very deep message.

Denis.

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2008-08-23 11:11 AM


Thanks dear Ida,

Yes, winter is on everyones mind here in Philadelphia.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-08-23 11:12 AM


Thanks dear Denis,

I'm very pleased that my Bones poems are working that way for you.

Love Bobby

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2008-08-24 01:27 AM


Warm blanketing wishes for Bones and his Mom.

- Owl

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-08-24 05:14 PM


Thanks dear OwlSA,

Those warm blanket wishes will help a great deal, and Mom and Bones appreciate them.

Love Bobby

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