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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2008-08-22 03:17 PM



Your skin to
Mine –
And deeper still…our
Longing.





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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2008-08-22 03:22 PM


You were always one to button up a fine poem...

This is a beauty...and will linger on my mind.




Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-08-23 09:53 AM



... the silkiest skin touch,
as overwhelming as it may be
in a moment's emotion,
never satiates
the longing of the heart

only the soul knows
of heights unknown
where the deepest longings
are answered

maybe those two eagles
soaring in the golden
majesty of a sunset

can give us an idea ...

Your poem is enchanting, dear Eric.
It lifts us out of density into
ethereal realms ...


Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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