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Aftermath of a Kiss (my challenge)
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Aftermath of a Kiss (my challenge) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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It was there just beneath her skin when he kissed her hand eyes down as if in worship the color rose no it burst like it was answering his lips and daring her not to react. It came through pores and clung modesty painting only in reds and pinks. "...buried way beneath the sheets I think she's having a meltdown..." "Buckcherry" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"mostly painting in reds and pinks" Love it! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Since it is somewhat meaningless to grade one's own poetic works, please allow me! ~ A+   EA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A very good response to you challenge and though I could see the "blush" when I read, I couldn't find the word anywhere. Well done. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
nice Write, Nice Challenge!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Simply delightful  , dear Temptress, and thank you for the challenge. It is fun!Perfectly met challenge! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks everyone. This one came to me one of those nights I couldn't sleep (one of several) so I thought it might make a good challenge also. thanks so much for the support. I have just recently started writing more often again, have been scared about how I am doing. "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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