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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest

0 posted 2008-08-21 03:46 PM



    

dusk

in horizon dusk
plane and hawk fly side by side
blotting out the sun


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-08-21 05:10 PM


Marti, I literally get excited when I see that there is a new post from you!

I can visualize that "Kodak Moment". There may be an economy of words in your poetry these days ~ and understandable so, however they stir the emotions and the imagination ~ and are always a joy to read.

Love you, my sweet friend,
Linda xo

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-08-21 05:10 PM


This is absolutely delightful, dear Marti. A wonderful haiku, one to dream with. And the picture? Oh, sheer elegance!

Enjoyed this very much!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-08-21 08:31 PM


I always enjoy reading your poetry!


ARCTIC WIND

Gaelynsgirl
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4 posted 2008-08-21 11:31 PM


Your image and your haiku both capture a moment that I want to stretch out to infinity.

in appreciation of your art!

Lynda

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5 posted 2008-08-22 01:51 AM


So lovely, Marti.  I have missed you.

Alison

Misty Lilacs
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6 posted 2008-08-22 07:53 AM


Arctic Wind ... what a wonderful response. Thank you so much.

ooxx  Marti

Misty Lilacs
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7 posted 2008-08-22 07:55 AM


Lynda ... thank you sweetie. I too love the picture and it feels like looking at infinity.

ooxx  Marti

Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2008-08-22 08:00 AM


Alison, you are so kind to reply. I love your poems also. I am here often reading and you are one of the people I always look for.
It is good to be here and to have written something.

ooxx  Marti

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-08-25 08:24 PM


Nice to see you back, Marti, Lovely Haiku.
                                      ida

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2008-08-26 07:58 AM


beautiful little write.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
11 posted 2008-08-26 10:08 AM


Much enjoyed the haiku.  Nicely done.
Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
12 posted 2008-08-26 07:41 PM


nice


xoxoxo

Misty Lilacs
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13 posted 2008-08-27 05:28 PM


Marchmadness, ThisDiamond, Mark Bohannan, and Dark Star

Thank you so much for your comments! It means a lot to me to have you stop by and read my little haiku.

ooxx Marti

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