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Open Door |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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{Open door} The quivering fingers touch timidly, tentatively, carefully the closed door. It is like a membrane, semi liquid. It sucks you in and let you out in the other side. One way please. So don’t try to return. The other side is a misty palace of meaningless truths. The other side is a breathing water to swim and float till eternity eats you. See the side of earth you have come from, see it in disconnection, slight hallucination. Open the door let me return cries the sleep cries the dream… The door only let you in. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wow, it is a disconcerting truth, isn't it? I think this piece is absolutely brilliant, mon ami Ku! Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent, Ku. Your poetry just gets better with each post. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Scarily exciting! I loved this. Lots of interesting curved layers. - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I have just read "Anger, He and She" and have come back to this poem and re-read it - this time, in conjunction with the above poem, and see it now in a new light. - Owl |
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