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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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Ohio

0 posted 2008-08-20 10:16 AM




I Am

I am a star shining within your eyes
A comet traveling  across the sky
A moonbeam shining bright
A shadow hidden in the night.

I am the tears in the gentle rain
The wind in the mountain terrain
The ice in the winter storm
The cry in the new babe born.

I am as cuddly as a stuffed toy  
As loveable as a little boy  
As old as a moment in time
As young as a girl in her prime.

I am a dreamer of dreams
A storyteller who likes to weave
A poet who likes to visualize
I am  who I am
I am me.

Love and Hugs
BonBon

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Lady Ayla
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since 2008-07-19
Posts 84
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1 posted 2008-08-20 11:08 AM


I find your visuals delightful! I'm glad you posted this.
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-08-20 11:11 AM


And I do love you the way you are, dear Bonbon!

This flows beautifully ...

Enjoyed it much.


Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-08-20 06:45 PM


Nice writing...James
XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2008-08-20 07:33 PM


ah    nice     (((Bonnie J)))

yes    You are a new born baby and you are the ebola virus

::smiles::

Like it or not      And if you ever think that you do  NOT  like  "it"....that's perfectly fine.   You enjoy that too    (((Bonnie J)))

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
5 posted 2008-08-20 10:51 PM



A very sweet tender poem dear Bonnie

It touches the heart.

Lindsay

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