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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-08-20 06:20 AM



there are those afternoons
by the lake with creaking boards
and eyes that wonder of your stride
when those buttons are flirting
and something silver shimmers

like the laughing eyes of lovers
from the water to the sun
wondering if depths are welcome
when heat touches surfaces
as slow palmed seduction perhaps

my mind strums your fragile bow
and you bend to bring me the music
from the woman skin of your instrument
learned by the finger's listening
tuning again the virgin experience

and we are souls of soft leather string
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1 posted 2008-08-20 10:28 AM


*goodness*

and *sighs*

this is so beautiful

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-08-20 10:36 AM


You make me collapse into the beauty of your verses.

Unsurpassed inspiration seems to be your daily gift ... and ours as you share it so generously.

Love,
Margherita

Gaelynsgirl
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3 posted 2008-08-20 11:31 AM


Curiously, all my descriptors begin with 's'

Suggestive, Sensual, superlative, seductive...

This leather string is still vibrating...

she sighs....

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-08-20 01:05 PM


Ms suesea, thank you babe for the soft side of your smile


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Ms mar, you make me smile dear one, thank you
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Ms lynda, sinsations simply stated soothe satiated satyrs. Thanks lady

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5 posted 2008-08-21 03:30 AM


Once upon a time, a weaver of magic wove words to create a tapestry of words.  The words were like a rainbow of color, but instead of color - they were magic and became a rainbow of images and sounds.  

As the Weaver spun magic images, a woman came upon his art.  She was one who slept fitfully and roamed the darkness, murmuring words softly to herself.  The Night Woman stopped and gazed upon his creations.  And she smiled as images flitted before her.  They enticed her to dance among them until night became a canvas that painted dreams.

She slept among the tapestries of his visions.

The End

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-08-21 05:46 AM


ms ali-san...I have heard of such a woman...in viking lore she is called the oatmeal vixen...thanks babe
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