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Anger, he and she
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Anger, he and she |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Anger, he and she ====================== She cannot fathom, why you become an easy prey of anger. Perhaps it is the dark blood that runs through human veins and arteries over the times and the changes. She seizes your raised fist and run. Runs through the lanes, alleys, houses, ages. When one tide ebbs, there is the next one; ready to ambush. Childhood subsides. She is still with the rogue, you. Her secret houses. Her pitiful endeavor to build a home around four walls one slanting roof and the resident fear of losing all someday soon. The anger is his other lady. She knows someday she will be the one to destroy anger and her love both, in a single angry stroke. ---------------------- ( my note:I sure hope against it) clever talks delay friendship! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Poddarku, Anger is very seldom a good thing--in particular between "he and she". Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This too, dear Ku, brings so much emotion! quote: Yes!! Impressive write. Love, Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is very powerful in many ways. A |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, I agree with Alison, powerful in many ways, just some being the recognition and acknowledgement that anger destroys, and that anger eventually begets anger, and that anger confronted with anger results in darkness. The blending of the physical and the metaphyiscal, and of the control and loss of control enhanced the excellence of the poem. Perhaps THE most powerful thing about this poem is how it could heal many, many people if read often enough and with enough intent. - Owl |
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