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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2008-08-18 10:59 PM



The sky was mute
and no longer
would define us

its compostion
post magestic
drowned
in its
cerulean blues

and
the two of us
wanderers
in the lovers limbo

caught between
a change of view.



[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-20-2008 07:35 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-08-18 11:29 PM


vagabond lovers in limbo beneath a muted sky

~ Not exactly the scenario deserving of a goddess.


Linda

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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2 posted 2008-08-19 05:50 AM


ms inki....

funny how that fits and feels...
enjoyed you babe

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-08-19 08:10 AM


You sing this blues so very well, dear Michele.

Love,
Margherita

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2008-08-19 10:54 AM


InkyOne~
In this ... you write my journey with your ink~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

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