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Open Poetry #43

familiar stranger

krizza
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since 2008-08-18

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0 posted 2008-08-18 08:49 PM

familiar stranger

she saw someone she knew at the corner of the shadowed cafeteria..

           ..smoking..

and found a chance to sit beside this stranger..

"had several coffee
               breaks together
                    afterwards..

in a place where caffeine is not available"//

He grabbed a couple of sandwiches

and dunked into the misty hot cup of coffee..

**deprived

of the true taste of nescafe,

she lit a stick of cigarette

and forced its nicotine to

mix with the frozen hot coffee..

and there was nothing left but silence..

and the harmony of the leaking a.c.

an embittered soul and an indifferent stranger..

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
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1 posted 2008-08-19 07:40 AM

"Familiar stranger" quite the affirmation ... this comes across as a very melancholic write, but you created the atmosphere with very vivid brushes.

May there be some sugar in the next coffee ...

Love,
Margherita

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