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krizza
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0 posted 2008-08-18 08:48 PM



                         She's

                                             Right

                                          there on

                   your


Left










silent.........

© Copyright 2008 krizza - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-08-19 07:35 AM


and "he" does not feel her presence? Your few words do induce questions and leave one wondering.

Welcome to Pip!

Love,
Margherita


Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-08-19 09:20 AM


Excellent work, Krizza.

Welcome to Passions! Please,
check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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3 posted 2008-08-19 10:49 AM


Krizza~
Welcome to the wonderful world of PiP~

Short entry that says just enough~
Enjoy all we have to offer~
Read and reply to others so that we will get to know you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-08-19 10:57 AM


Clever and uniquely presented!

Hi, there krizza! Welcome aboard the pip ship!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
5 posted 2008-08-19 04:57 PM


welcome
xoxo-Sherry

Lady Ayla
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6 posted 2008-08-19 05:25 PM


..I had to look to make sure...
nourzihane
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Algeria
7 posted 2008-08-19 05:31 PM


thank
                                             you
                                          for

                   your

words


nourzihane  

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2008-08-19 10:55 PM


Krizza~
LOL ... color me confused~
Are you and nourzihane one and the same ?
It's okay ... I confuse easily~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

nourzihane
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9 posted 2008-08-20 05:00 AM


sir marge

nourzihane is one person

thank you

DreamerSpirit
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10 posted 2008-08-20 08:52 PM


left me reflexing, never read something presented like this, i liked it few words but i understood it in a very personal way.

amazing write!


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