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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-08-18 04:56 PM


Expressed by fury
fueled by rage
as the drafts of ice
turns the page

Honesty drowns
as jealousy bellows
despair lingers
while this pain echo's.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-08-19 07:25 AM


To heal it is necessary to convert all those negative feelings you mention into positive ones ... such as unconditional love instead of jealousy.

The uneasiness comes across powerfully. But recovery is on its way, no doubt, as you become aware of the obstacles.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-08-19 08:53 AM


Yo Angel,

It's great to see you up and around again.

Bobby

Alison
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3 posted 2008-08-19 11:16 AM


Angel,

I have missed seeing you here - welcome back.  Your poem is powerful and it shows your growth.  Please, keep sharing with us.

Alison

xTr3m3sT
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4 posted 2008-08-19 01:06 PM


Thank you all, recovery is a slow process, yet, it's also rewarding.
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