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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2008-08-17 08:26 PM



what can you do???
when you know you love him
and that is that???

what do you do???
when you begin
to fall out of love
with him???
and you just can't accept
that that is that???

what can you do???
when every song you hear
tells the story so clear..
a story that was written
long before you were here...

what can you do???
when loving him
is all you can do!!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-08-17 09:36 PM


Yo dear Angel4aKing,

You'll do fine Hon.  This is a cute poem, I like it.

I'm in the mood to reassure all the pretty young chicks tonight.

Love Bobby


Street Poet
Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82

2 posted 2008-08-17 11:59 PM


Good poem, I think most people can relate to it.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2008-08-25 09:50 AM


yep

it stinks

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