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Open Poetry #43

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xXSilentMelodiesXx
New Member

since 2008-05-27

Posts 7

0 posted 2008-08-17 02:57 PM

It's been exacly just one year,
Since you threw us out that door,
That mean expression on your face,
It haunts me even more.

Those words that you had screamed at me,
They pierced right through my soul,
Those tears that had streamed down my face,
They've seaced to ever flow.

Ever since that day had passed,
Things had never been the same,
That nice kind man you use to be,
He never had returned.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-08-17 03:21 PM

How sad. I hope you are better off for it.

A

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

2 posted 2008-08-17 03:41 PM

This is beautiful. I can really relate to it. It's so descriptive.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-08-17 03:57 PM

I made such a stupid comment. Of course, you are better for it because you are not with him.

My thoughts,
A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-08-17 06:30 PM

It is very sad indeed, may you be able to forgive and find peace.

Highly emotional write.

Love,
Margherita

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