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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-08-16 04:30 PM


It has been awhile since I have written anything, hope you like it  

When I met you, I knew we’d be together
Just the two of us, with undying love
The first thought that came to my mind
Was heaven had to have sent you from above

With your sweet smile and laughter
And your gorgeous green eyes
Most importantly, your great personality
Sends me soaring through the skies

I’m so blessed to have found someone like you
I knew we’d stay together until the end from the start
I love everything about you, and…
You are my never-breaking heart
<3

© Copyright 2008 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
SkaaDee
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since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada
1 posted 2008-08-16 10:13 PM


heart felt.

I like the last line

Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 82

2 posted 2008-08-18 12:03 PM


I like the concept of this poem. Great Writing

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