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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-08-16 03:35 PM



Wind,
Nothing but its
Caress…swift in the
Void of its giving.
And still each leaf sways
Grateful in its
passing.



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MegMeg
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1 posted 2008-08-16 07:41 PM


I enjoy the softness of your poem it's calming and nice
Margherita
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2 posted 2008-08-17 04:22 AM


Ahhh, the dance of Nature that invites to dance along, dear Eric!

With your beautiful words you make us SEE through your eyes and focus on love and beauty.

Love you,
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-08-17 04:37 AM


The Wordsmith does it again, beautiful writing, Eric.
                         Ida

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4 posted 2008-08-17 11:21 PM


EricC~
Just SO very lovely~
How softly you word-dance in the wind~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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