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MegMeg
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since 2007-05-14
Posts 85
Virginia

0 posted 2008-08-16 02:26 PM


For Sarah and Jon


Two people sit both hand and hand
smiling at each other, tenderness in heart.
The beat of their hearts a joyous band
playing for each other, making beautiful art.

Wounds from their past have vanished away
with each other for comfort, no longer their worried
for forever they'll know the others heart will say
"I love you" Their lives can be slow or much hurried

Healing each others past and making another's hereafter
Together to live and together to love
forever with the tears and together with the laughter
their love is always something to be glad of.

They sit their hearts and hands intertwined
knowing what they have is one of a kind.

[This message has been edited by MegMeg (08-18-2008 04:45 PM).]

© Copyright 2008 Megan - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-08-16 09:55 PM


Yo MegMeg,

I really liked the thought behind these words.

Check some of your spelling.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-08-17 04:31 AM


Dear Megan, this is very lovely and so uplifting! It is great to celebrate a new love like you did! I enjoyed it much.

Love,
Margherita


"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-08-17 10:24 PM


Enjoyed...James
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