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Promissory Note
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Promissory Note |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Promissory Note Days, spring board shuffled the hand of time Molted and muffled in some grand design Feathers falling like snow, through the simmered sun’s glow Looking back as I watch them combine Dealing done by the slight hand of time As they pass by my eyes, ne’er to weep their demise Though I know moments glisten reminiscent unwise As if taught on the fly, clever statements defy For the wings of a whisper speeded on enterprise Dealing done in good times fated sighs Every once in a while, there by dusks soft beguile Held so precious a tear shed bequest every trial In the days still to come, paying forward now done Looking over the future hope sutures in smile Dealing done as time fades by the mile Copyright Kkh 8/14/08 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Looking over the future hope sutures in smile Every line holds perfect beauty, dear Kathleen. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The budweiser horses are faster than this... huh? Everyone seems to be on strike... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Ah, come on lady, I KNOW I can ALWAYS count on you for a *sigh* waiting for a place to happen~ 'Every once in a while, there by dusks soft beguile Held so precious a tear shed bequest every trial' Ah yes, that did it for me~ ::smiles:: at Magnus  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Although I am not particularly fond of endline rhyme, some really fine images here! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The title is all so fitting for the words that fall into perfect pitch beneath it. Breathlessly lovely |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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