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martiniat8
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0 posted 2008-08-15 05:44 PM


The rain came
splattered
scattered
tapping drops

prisms absent of
sunshine's rays
shaken from a dream
passed towers clocks

nesting
nuzzling
neck
and nape

silken
surrender
sweetened
escape

to dreams
of tenderness
and soft blonde
locks

© Copyright 2008 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2008-08-15 05:54 PM


Very lovely!

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-08-17 10:50 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2008-08-21 03:24 AM


This is beautiful.

A

DreamerSpirit
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4 posted 2008-08-21 11:17 AM


Wonderful Write I loved it.
HopeS
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5 posted 2008-08-21 01:34 PM


Hey Brad I love the way you express tender dreams  

Hope

martiniat8
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6 posted 2008-08-22 11:19 PM


Thank you all! Thanks Hope, good to hear from you, it's been too long
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