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Open Poetry #43

tangerine lily

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-08-15 02:39 AM

Tangerine Lily
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An egg yolk sun
spreads over that
marmalade grass.
Eyes in a trance.
Fingers pick up
the tangerine lily.
First in this patch.

“Is not it full of grace?”
the boy who has brought his
father to take a look,
cries out. The color of
delight is tangerine.
Suddenly the man feels
something is changing within.

clever talks delay friendship!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-08-15 03:10 AM

This one has so many layers to it, love it.
Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-08-15 06:45 AM

you know dear Ku.. I love your work!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-08-15 12:30 PM

I loved the poem, the images, the concepts, but most of all the passion.

- Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-08-15 05:02 PM

I can imagine you being that boy, dear Ku!
You see the beauty around you and you touch the hearts with your sensitivity and with your exceptional poetic skills.

Love,
Margherita

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