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Kalandria
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since 2006-05-23
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Yorkshire, England

0 posted 2008-08-14 05:00 AM



For all the Billys that I teach.

Billy


" He's a bad one, that Billy".
Everybody knows.
Stalking the streets with fists clenched
In the pockets of a worn out coat.
Stealing milk from the shop near his house,
And swearing as they haul him away.
Just ten years of age.
Beyond hope, they say.

"He's a wrong one, that Billy"
Everybody knows.
An unknown name on a register
At a school that he never attends.
He stands by the chain linked fence,
Kicking newspapers that he cannot read.
A furrowed brow,
On a face that's seen too much.

" He's a strange one, that Billy"
Everybody knows.
Sitting alone on a bench in the park
Watching the others as they play.
They whisper and point.
Their words carrying to the ears
Of the boy
Who just wants to belong.

He's an angel, that Billy.
Nobody knows.
Waking at dawn to tend to a mother
Who lies still in her bed.
Sleeping off the effects of another late night,
in the arms of a man with no name.
Her family, a burden
She'd rather forget.

He's a hero, that Billy.
Nobody knows.
Stealing milk to feed his baby brother
Knowing the money has gone.
Washing his clothes in a sink full of pots.
Every day the same, no respite
For the child who sees the world
Turn and walk away.


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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
1 posted 2008-08-14 06:00 AM


enjoyed this heart song...
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-08-14 06:05 AM


Dear Kalandria, what a tremendously poignant write!! You open the eyes and the heart of the reader.

Yes, I guess, there are many such heroic kids like this apparently well-known Billy you speak of.

That's why we never should stop at the apparent surface. Being human means trying to understand.

Thank you for this wonderfully sensitive contribution, dear Kalandria.

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2008-08-15 12:41 PM


This brought tears to my eyes for this Billy and all of your Billies and the ones I used to teach too, and those that neither of us have taught.

- Owl

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-08-15 08:19 PM


Yo Kalandria,

This is a good poem.  Hey, I know that guy.  He even has the same name.  All Billys are alike.

Good on Billy, a person has to do what they have to do.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (08-16-2008 10:03 AM).]

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5 posted 2008-08-15 08:25 PM


This is one of the best poems I have read
lately...Very well written,  great lines.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
6 posted 2008-08-16 08:57 AM


A most moving write!  I'd like to think that there are many "Billy's" in the world but these days I think perhaps not - well, at least in my part of the world because here it seems that the family unit is not what it was.  The kids leave home and live on the streets.  So sad!

Helen

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2008-08-17 05:01 AM


I was very moved by this poem. Having worked for the local school dist. for 30 years, I have known a few "Billys" and this poem should be read by everyone who deals with the education of children.
Excellent!
                                           Ida

Kalandria
Junior Member
since 2006-05-23
Posts 44
Yorkshire, England
8 posted 2008-08-17 10:23 AM


Thankyou all for your lovely comments. My Billy has many names and many faces, but I see him every day and I guess I wrote the poem to remind myself that, even on the hardest of days, when Billy is driving me mad, I will never have to live the way he does or have to find the strength he finds every day and so each time I try to be patient and understand. My Billys really are heroes and I wish them all the best.
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