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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2008-08-13 10:25 PM



Every moment of the past
that has lain heavy upon this heart
was erased the moment that you
took my hand
and walked with me
into the light


of truth.


The darkness has slowly slipped away,
it is gone, like all of the yesterdays
that would have held me
in the dark shadows


of doubt.


It is now, that I soar
upon the enlightened wings
of reality
only to escape
but gently
into this freedom
that has been found


within the essence
of your soul.


© dmsmith 8-12-08

© Copyright 2008 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-08-13 10:30 PM


Oh, Donna, you have the sound of happiness in your voice! Thank you for the warm smile tonight.  
Lady Ayla
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2 posted 2008-08-14 12:11 PM


Nice, it made me think of the special person in my life.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2008-08-14 01:17 AM


peaceful and calm feeling

nice

Margherita
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4 posted 2008-08-14 04:52 AM


Dear Donna, this is heart warming in its gentle beauty and gratitude.

To be aware of the gifts we receive is wonderful.

Enjoyed this much.

Love,
Margherita

Kalandria
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5 posted 2008-08-14 05:03 AM


What a wonderful, uplifting poem. Would give hope to even the most down of hearts.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-08-14 09:40 AM


Beautiful Words from the heart!


ARCTIC WIND

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2008-08-16 06:48 PM


Thank you all sweet friends for blessing me with your kindness of your replies here.  Hugs n peace  ~D
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2008-08-17 12:29 PM


A lovely poem from a happy lady...nice.
                                    Ida

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9 posted 2008-08-17 03:25 AM


Donna,

I love this and I love the happiness that soars with your words.  This, my friend, is a keeper - as are you.

Love,
A

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2008-08-18 07:09 PM


Donna, may your grateful heart always have reason to be filled with gratitude!

You are a fine poetess ~ and woman. I am so happy for you! You deserve only the best ~ and it would appear that you now have it!

Loving hug & a broad smile,
Linda

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2008-08-18 07:21 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Honeybunch
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12 posted 2008-08-19 12:14 PM


Beautiful, Donna!  To find freedom in the essence of a soul is ... well, I guess it's love!

Helen

inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2008-08-19 12:35 PM


a sweet reminder on a sometimes jaded inkedgoddess that its still out there afterall
nice to read you today

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