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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-08-13 08:49 PM


   September Morning

Silver dew forming
on the morning meadow.
Smoke ascending in slow
  spiral-dance
with the cool rising mist
to a one-bird song of
  Summer passing...
in slow surrender
to the serene, silent,
dazzling, sunlit clarity
of this fine September
  dawn.


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1 posted 2008-08-13 08:51 PM


I can't wait for FALL!!

loved this

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2 posted 2008-08-13 08:57 PM


Enjoyed the Write Bruce!-- I too, love the Fall, I am excited as well!!!


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3 posted 2008-08-13 10:31 PM


September always seems to bring the most pleasant weather, and your words have me staring at my calendar in anticipation.
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4 posted 2008-08-14 02:13 AM


This poem reminds me of how happy I am that fall is coming.
                                    Ida

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5 posted 2008-08-14 06:43 AM


Your longing for September is felt in this beautiful anticipation, dear Bruce.
I can't see any signs of fall yet here ... we are burning, boiling, melting ...

Love,
Margherita


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6 posted 2008-08-15 04:45 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

September is a good time of year.  It's not too hot, and not too cold.

Bobby

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7 posted 2008-08-15 09:27 PM


I love September too, and this one fine write; WOW!!!!!!!!
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8 posted 2008-08-17 04:56 PM


I love watching the mist rise off the river on early September mornings.  I love listening to the Robins in the chokecherry trees, eating berries before flying south.  I love hearing the cranes and Canada geese overhead.  I love the colors of the leaves.  I love frosty, sunny mornings.  I love fall.

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9 posted 2008-08-17 05:38 PM


are we there yet? sure felt like it this past week

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10 posted 2008-08-17 07:24 PM


An inspiration to memories Bruce. A lovely breath of words...

L.

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11 posted 2008-08-19 06:55 PM


Nice...James
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12 posted 2008-08-21 02:58 AM


I came back to this because I love it so much.  It really sounds like my September mornings.  It's a keeper, Bruce.

Alison

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13 posted 2008-08-21 11:18 AM


I loved this one, i like september, i love it.
not only because my birthday is on september 13th but because..i don't know, something in the air is in september, not only spring something warm every year i enjoy september very much.

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14 posted 2008-08-21 02:35 PM


September is my favorite month, all the fall colors, leaves...pumpkin spice smell floating through my home, the smell of the fresh rain, mixed with leaves...



a wonderful poem about autumn....

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15 posted 2008-08-21 06:09 PM


liked it
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16 posted 2008-08-21 08:25 PM


I love October too!
Just beautiful SHDP!


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17 posted 2008-08-23 12:02 PM


One can really feel the light change to autumn while reading this. It's marvelous.
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