navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Mud
Open Poetry #43
Post A Reply Post New Topic Mud Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
gdcod2player
Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117


0 posted 2008-08-13 03:43 PM


Cheated by every thing but the mud
I went to find someone that understands
But that seemed like I asked for too much
I need to look down the road
For something to make me go
The life I want is out there
Maybe it’s too far
I hope I can drive through it all
So I can reach my destination
Every one has a story to tell
But no will listen to
The words other people have to say
Until the words come crawling back
It doesn’t have their attention
The reasons I gave for every crash
Isn’t a lie but every one keeps saying I’m crazy
The only thing that means anything is gone
And now I just have empty words
That she’ll never learn
I have to lie
Till I’m gone
I stand
Alone till the end of everything

[This message has been edited by gdcod2player (08-14-2008 02:47 PM).]

© Copyright 2008 gdcod2player - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-08-14 05:48 AM


To be able to listen is indeed a very special gift. The loneliness is felt through your words.

Write your emotions and trust your divine nature to guide you on your journey. Share your love unconditionally and trust the new opportunities of every new day.

Love,
Margherita

Kalandria
Junior Member
since 2006-05-23
Posts 44
Yorkshire, England
2 posted 2008-08-14 05:59 AM


I feel for your loss. I think we all know how it sometimes feels as though we speak without being heard and you've expressed this in a very heartfelt poem. Thankyou.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Mud

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary