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Aimster
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0 posted 2008-08-12 08:38 PM


The tears fall slowly
Drop by drop
Stinging my skin
I don’t even care

The wetness on my face
Only serves to remind
Gray skies loom above
The thunder rolls in the distance

Looking outside
I press my fingertips against the window pane
My heart feels so hollow
Even as I try to scream out, I am silent

I see a faint light in the distance
Squinting…I try to get a better look
As quickly as it appears, it’s gone
Only blackness meets my gaze

I’m a prisoner in my own world
Unable to break free
Why do I let you do this?
I raise my fists in anger

Despite the pain, I try to smile
I only hang my head down in shame
Catching a glimpse of myself
I don’t even recognize the eyes looking back at me

Once more…the tears fall down slowly
Drop by drop
Stinging my skin
I’m too numb to care

The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

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1 posted 2008-08-12 09:01 PM


Amy,

this is heartbreaking.

it's also the best poem I've ever read from you.

LindsayP
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2 posted 2008-08-12 09:51 PM



I feel for you Aimster my dear for that

is a very heart touching poem but keep the chin up for the sun will shine again.

Lindsay

Aimster
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3 posted 2008-08-13 09:08 PM


ty for your beautiful comments!

sea i have missed you. maybe we can chat sometime soon. shoot me an email if/when time allows.

The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

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