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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-08-12 02:58 PM





Empty

Empty is mine quill,
for my muse has left me.
No longer does it scribe
upon the parchments,
its poetic mots.

Empty

ARCTIC WIND

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SEA
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1 posted 2008-08-12 03:10 PM


It makes me crazy when my muse runs off!

fickle little things aren't they?


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-08-12 03:14 PM


A/W there is another waiting to know you pen. N joyed
Honeybunch
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3 posted 2008-08-12 03:15 PM


AC - Maybe try not thinking or saying "empty" and then see what happens.  

Helen

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-08-12 04:07 PM


Yo Artic Wind,

Hang in there kid.  You'll be just fine.

Bobby

Sunshine
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5 posted 2008-08-12 04:49 PM


Maybe only for the moment...I can certainly attest that you've been reading around!

And we all appreciate an avid reader, anytime!




Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-08-12 05:37 PM


SEA,

Yes, sometimes they like to run off for awhile lol. Thanks for reading my poem, I am glad that you liked it...


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-08-12 05:37 PM


Dark Stranger!

Thanks so much!


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Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-08-12 05:38 PM


Honeybunch!

Thanks for the helpful suggestion!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-08-12 05:38 PM


Bobby-

Thanks! I think I will lol


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Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-08-12 05:39 PM


Sunshine!

Thanks so much, I love reading poems past or present ones. It's just too fun. Thanks for taking the time to click!


ARCTIC WIND

sewasham
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11 posted 2008-08-12 11:19 PM


I've been there AW, but eventually the ole muse will return from vacation and you'll be burning ink in no time. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Artic Wind
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12 posted 2008-08-12 11:43 PM


Sewasham!

Thanks so much, Yupp I do believe my good ole' muse will come back!


ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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13 posted 2008-08-13 10:13 AM


In apparent emptiness you are unencumbered and soon you will hear the crystal clear voice of your muse again, dear Michael. You are too young to imagine your muse has left you, just because she takes a summer break of a few days!

You are always a source of joy, dear Michael, with your poems and with your gratifying presence here distributing replies on other people's offerings. Thank you always.

You will see your muse can't stay far from you for long!

Love and joy.
Margherita

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-08-13 11:34 AM


Sweet Margherita!

Thank you so much, I do believe I muse will come back from the vacation lol Muse is just enjoying a good relaxing time a the beach. Thank you again for reading and leaving your wonderful comment!

to you
ARCTIC WIND

Prasad Nataraj
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15 posted 2008-08-15 02:08 PM


Hi Artic Wind, you where able to write about this feeling, is a clear example you are doing well. Before you realize you will start writing again. Very nice picture too. Prasad
Marchmadness
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16 posted 2008-08-16 03:45 PM


Your muse will return, just taking a little vacation.
                                Ida

MegMeg
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17 posted 2008-08-16 07:40 PM


even if your muse doesn't return you can always find another. but I'm sure it will
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18 posted 2008-08-16 11:18 PM


Hey AW,

You might look in your car stereo.  I sometimes find mine hiding in there when I turn off all the music in my car  -  I think it gets jealous of all the noise around me and plays hide and seek until I am ready to pay attention to its whispers again.

A

Artic Wind
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19 posted 2008-08-27 01:38 PM


prasad

thanks so much!


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Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-08-27 01:39 PM


Marchmadness!

THANKS

ARCTIC WIND


Artic Wind
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21 posted 2008-08-27 01:39 PM


MegMeg!

Thanks a lot


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Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-08-27 01:40 PM


Alison,

Thanks so much!


ARCTIC WIND

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