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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-08-12 05:51 AM


wrapping the sides of my mind
in the tinfoil permanence of waiting
to see if you are glass or liquid
when you press to my lips
the edges of your smile

we have discussed illusions
and fantasy with all of its pieces
and then we said maybe it could fit
if we hurried when no one was looking
and forced it quickly

hoping it would get stuck in glue
that was quicker than we were
but we didn't think it would
so we planned on trying again
just in case the first time didn't

and now we just love the practicing
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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-08-12 06:47 AM


quote:
wrapping the sides of my mind
in the tinfoil permanence of waiting
to see if you are glass or liquid
when you press to my lips
the edges of your smile



One thing I truly appreciate is the permanence of your inspiration within the impermanence of all things, dear D.!

Yet another most precious gift from your pen.

Love,
Margherita


"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-08-12 09:01 AM


The finer arts are always a practice
in motion...

and this lingers well on the mind.



Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-08-12 09:01 AM


Ms mar thanks babe!


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Ms sunshine. Thank you fair lady for the eyes

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4 posted 2008-08-12 09:19 AM


very nice D
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5 posted 2008-08-12 12:39 PM


Wonderful Penning Indeed!


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6 posted 2008-08-12 02:11 PM


Ms suesea thanks babe for the smile.


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A/w thank you for the montana touch (grin)

Gaelynsgirl
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7 posted 2008-08-12 03:06 PM


My mind just loves the taste of this!!! A delicious read for all the senses.

Lynda

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8 posted 2008-08-12 03:17 PM


Ms Lynda

Your mind smiles my thoughts. Thank you. Ms

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