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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-08-11 03:03 PM



Saved,
With every
Giving –
Atonement traced against
You…and Eden on my
Fingers trail.



© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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1 posted 2008-08-11 03:17 PM


Eric - I still say I want to write like you!  Enjoyed!

Helen

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with you
2 posted 2008-08-11 03:39 PM


lovely
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-08-12 03:01 AM


quote:
Saved,
With every
Giving –
Atonement traced against
You…and Eden on my
Fingers trail.



Oh my, dear Eric! You write from a place of enlightenment that few reach. And you do it ever so magically.

Love you,
Margherita

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4 posted 2008-08-14 02:09 AM


You do have a magical way with words, Eric.
                                       Ida

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