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ChrisTonner
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since 2008-08-06
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0 posted 2008-08-11 10:28 AM


Affair of Destiny

Following the line,
that is where I am.
No dilution, just obedience.

Answer the questions:
Are we sure?
Is it possible to be so wrong?

Will change alter course,
or is this just delusion,
opinion formed from lust.

The solution is coming,
and we shall soon see,
if the choices that we make
are truly destiny!!

July '98'

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2008-08-11 02:05 PM


Destiny and fate don't always walk hand in hand.  Sometimes it takes the knowledge of where life will take us if we pay attention to be able to entwine those fingers.  This one intrigues the mind a bit and that is always god.  Well written.
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