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alps in black and pale and silver
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alps in black and pale and silver |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I could go to the confessional and admit that the alps are lovely now that I saw them behind you for the first time some yesterday but then your eyes were there too and I would have to lie if he asked if I even noticed what was beyond the foreground when you were in black and pale with silver and looking away just wearing the afternoon like a glider does the sky reading my mind book with your smile turning the pages without looking down but knowing the words in other words without even spell correcting just getting down to the mastering ______________ daark |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"reading my mind book with your smile turning the pages without looking down" that's what you do  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suesea, thank you babe for turning my eye pages |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, This poem is the perfect way to start my day. You weave beauty so erotically. Your eyes miss little and you have a wonderful way of sharing through your poetry. A |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
From visions of the mind come the thoughts of the heart. Nice view you share and now I am wondering if I would miss the background. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
effortless travel you carry me on word trains and play map music. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you babe for the windows you look through. _______________ friend Mark...so good to see you around amigo, and you bless me with your touch here _________________ ms indi, would lead you astray as often as possible if you would just keep the cuffs on, thanks babe |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
when you were in black and pale with silver and looking away just wearing the afternoon like a glider does the sky ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm so loving the view from here. You paint a gorgeous daydream, DS~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm... yes, Mr Daark... more words of wisdom from your beautiful pen.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your mind book is simply fascinating, dear D.! There are poetic heights in this poem like just wearing the afternoon like a glider does the sky which is totally awesome, but the poem is simply perfect in its wholeness. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bluezy, thanks babe for peeking in and touching. ___________________ ms r&b, thank you lady from under sides.. ______________________ ms mar, thank you babe for the soft sweetness of your eyes on this |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Geez...I never know how to truly tell you how much I love your work! Great to read you again. "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Tempt' you smile me lady friend. Thank you. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good Write Daark! ARCTIC WIND |
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