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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-08-10 04:31 PM



    

Earth's Last Eden

~*_*~
*
A mystical gate lies just beyond dank, musky plains.
It is the entrance to a world full of beauty and light.
Upon opening the doors, you're unlocking the secret gift from God.

Butterflies flutter around hills of daisies as birds sing God songs,
A majestic tree stands strong in endless glow,
Apples of knowledge are free for the plucking.
All is guarded by golden fences with ivy twining.

Mist from a waterfalls is caressing to the face,
--Refreshing one's eyes to it's beauty,.
God holds you in His loving embrace,
--Welcoming you to His land of

Earth's Last Eden

~*_*~
*

ARCTIC WIND

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1 posted 2008-08-10 04:33 PM


stunning!
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2 posted 2008-08-10 04:35 PM


Indeed, stunning..a most beautiful scene,
thanx for the description.

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3 posted 2008-08-10 04:41 PM


SEA-

And why thank you!
Thanks for dropping by


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Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-08-10 04:42 PM


Magnus!

Thanks so much
Glad you enjoyed the write


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Margherita
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5 posted 2008-08-10 04:42 PM


Ahhh, dear Michael, that is the place to BE! I trust you it exists, next time I see a butterfly I'll ask it kindly to show me the way ...

So magical and charming ... and divine!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2008-08-10 04:43 PM


Margherita!~

The butterfly will guide you to it's very home... Earths last Eden!

I am so happy that you liked the write Margherita!, May you find peace and Happiness there


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jwesley
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7 posted 2008-08-10 06:12 PM


enjoyed this my friend...especially
".......as birds sing God songs,"...
terrific wording here.

j.

LindsayP
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8 posted 2008-08-10 09:58 PM



Earths last Eden certainly looks like the place to go to my friend.

You wrote it well Michael.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-08-10 10:47 PM


Yo Artic Wind,

This is well done.  It sounds like a wonderful place.

Love Bobby

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-08-10 11:37 PM


Jwesley!

Thanks so much


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Artic Wind
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Lindsay!

Thanks


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12 posted 2008-08-10 11:38 PM


Robert Jordan-

Thanks so much!


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Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2008-08-11 11:32 AM


Lovely visions and very well expressed.  I could see it without the picture and that says much to the expression of view.
Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-08-11 11:39 AM


Mark!

WOW! thanks so much, I am glad you liked it!


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JamesMichael
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15 posted 2008-08-12 04:10 AM


Nice...James
Artic Wind
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16 posted 2008-08-12 12:53 PM


JamesMichael-

Thank you so much!


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Earth Angel
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17 posted 2008-08-13 07:10 PM


Now that's my kind of tree! ~ especially when I've had exams to write! I would have eaten a bushel or two of those knowledge apples before heading to school! lol

Love your mystical writes, AW! ~ They're magical. ~ and you always post the perfect pic to go with them!

Love and hugs,
EA



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18 posted 2008-08-14 10:14 PM


EA!!

WOW, thank you so very much

to you
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Prasad Nataraj
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19 posted 2008-08-15 02:28 PM


The right place to be when I retire looks so pleasant and clam. Nice write. Prasad
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20 posted 2008-08-21 08:35 PM


Prasad!

thanks


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