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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2008-08-10 12:20 PM


the plans were made
the deck stacked
in faver of who?
who coulda knew?
in the end
what's true
is true
to fight is to defend
til the death for you
and would you let me in?
unclean and full of sin?
behind your door?
I couldn't ask for more
you never asked me
what it's worth
as I was going through
an evil rebirth!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Magnus
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1 posted 2008-08-10 12:41 PM


Good job of putting this together.  a stormy
write,   with the winds blowing...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2008-08-10 12:51 PM


When we love unconditionally we need not ask what it's worth.

May the door open and whatever remains heavy on the heart be forgiven ...

I found your inquisitive poem interesting.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2008-08-10 04:25 PM


great emotion-filled Write


ARCTIC WIND

Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2011-07-31 06:29 PM


I actually wrote this after going through soem pretty tough stuff and surrounded by complete hypocrites...the sarcasm in the line woudl you let me in, unclean and fullof sin, was definitely sarcasm and aimed at hypocrites....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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