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what's it worth???

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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 08-10-2008 12:20 PM       View Profile for Angel4aKing   Email Angel4aKing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Angel4aKing

the plans were made
the deck stacked
in faver of who?
who coulda knew?
in the end
what's true
is true
to fight is to defend
til the death for you
and would you let me in?
unclean and full of sin?
behind your door?
I couldn't ask for more
you never asked me
what it's worth
as I was going through
an evil rebirth!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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1 posted 08-10-2008 12:41 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Good job of putting this together.  a stormy
write,   with the winds blowing...
Margherita
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2 posted 08-10-2008 12:51 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

When we love unconditionally we need not ask what it's worth.

May the door open and whatever remains heavy on the heart be forgiven ...

I found your inquisitive poem interesting.

Love,
Margherita
Artic Wind
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3 posted 08-10-2008 04:25 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

great emotion-filled Write


ARCTIC WIND
Angel4aKing
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4 posted 07-31-2011 06:29 PM       View Profile for Angel4aKing   Email Angel4aKing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel4aKing

I actually wrote this after going through soem pretty tough stuff and surrounded by complete hypocrites...the sarcasm in the line woudl you let me in, unclean and fullof sin, was definitely sarcasm and aimed at hypocrites....

~~~kingsangel~~~

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