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Magnus
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0 posted 2008-08-10 11:57 AM


It was two's when two met, when two eyes gazed
upon the blue of a passionate thought.   Two's
when hearts momentarily thumped and minds
lightly bumped in the night skies.  Just twos,
when a friendship grew and left each to the
destiny of one's...as twos continued on, drifting
onward in search of ones.


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"when hearts momentarily thumped and minds
lightly bumped in the night skies.  Just twos,
when a friendship grew and left each to the
destiny of one's"

very much enjoyed this

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-08-10 12:45 PM


Lovely thoughts, dear Barry. I think we always long for "one" who becomes the one half of "two", but together makes "ONE".

Love and joy.
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-08-10 04:24 PM


And Double the Applause Magnus!


ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2008-08-10 06:21 PM


Kool write, me friend...

j.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2008-08-10 06:26 PM


Magnus~
You so please me with your poetic thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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6 posted 2008-08-11 03:11 PM


You will never see a Warm Fuzzy's face,
Because a Warm Fuzzy is TWO Fuzzites in Embrace!

Many warm Fuzzies 2 go with this Poem. 2day you 1 the prize with this. I have no doubt that 2morrow will be gr8 4 you 2.
Count on it!

Sherry

    

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7 posted 2008-08-12 08:39 AM


nice buildup and seque into the one from 2
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8 posted 2008-08-13 06:48 PM


Magnanimous One, now I know what you have been doing in your absence! ~ Learning to count! lol

Cute write.

2 B or not 2 B,

Big smile,
Linda

Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2008-09-05 03:56 PM


Seems that finding that perfect soulmate is an endless search.  I enjoyed you thoughts on this one.

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Just twos,
when a friendship grew and left each to the
destiny of one's...as twos continued on, drifting
onward in search of ones.
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10 posted 2008-09-07 04:29 PM


Very interesting play on words, Excellent write.
                                Ida

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11 posted 2008-09-07 09:41 PM


I admire the bravery of those who continue the search.

Excellent write, my friend! *S*

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