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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2008-08-10 11:24 AM

My soul feels the river's flow as two hearts
traverse the bend of love's sweet heartache.
For you have given to me more than I might ever
taste or tarry in wait of your softness.

Your eyes have lingered upon me and touched me
in ways that only we both might understand...for I
live to see you upon each rise of a fire filled
sky...and soon, so very soon I shall dance upon
the flames of my inner soul...carrying my heart
to the place of our birth...that we might once more
dream of that which calls us...and waits for
eternity's rush...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-08-10 11:34 AM

A most beautiful rendering.
Happiness~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-08-10 12:53 PM

quote:
and soon, so very soon I shall dance upon
the flames of my inner soul...carrying my heart
to the place of our birth...that we might once more
dream of that which calls us...and waits for
eternity's rush...

Deeply poignant and beautiful, dear Barry!

Love,
Margherita

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2008-08-10 12:55 PM

ahhha there you go....

making such soft *sighs*

loved this!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-08-10 02:10 PM

Magnus~

'Your eyes have lingered upon me and touched me
in ways that only we both might understand'

It is sooooooooo good to see you here with the beauty of this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-08-11 01:18 AM

This is beautiful, Barry.

Alison

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-08-11 08:53 AM

Nice descriptive poetic piece magnus!

ARCTIC WIND

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2008-08-11 11:21 AM

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Your eyes have lingered upon me and touched me
in ways that only we both might understand
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Now honestly, there is nothing better than that experience and you describe it all so very well. Cudos for a job well done with plenty of visual sentiment.

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2008-08-11 01:02 PM

Absolutely wonderful!!!

Sherry

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2008-08-11 02:59 PM

This is beautiful.

Eric

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2008-08-11 11:45 PM

I so enjoyed the anticipation of it all.

Very nicely done, Barry~

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