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gata in pen shiver gowns
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gata in pen shiver gowns |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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meandering the nonchalant morning again and you stumble in lost in your have too and eyes not open kitty hidden in woman but then again you often are distant keeping the gata hidden for thoughts my man eyes follow your pathwaythe curves of your skin ends whisper but I don't listen lest I speak from the man sides of thinking in the old words that bleed on parchments and you would roll them into moments and wrap them with smile strings then put them there in that place you go for some other later on time when you came back as another morning wondering if my pen still wanted you _________________ daark [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-16-2008 12:25 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and you would roll them into moments and wrap them with smile strings then put them there in that place you go for some other later on time when you came back as another morning wondering if my pen still wanted you ah Mr Daark.... so true, so true.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks so much lady friend |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Good Lord D, just when I thought there was no way that you could possibly ever get any better, here you are, makin me shiver with the beauty of your words again. You, are soooo good mister.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs...thanks so much Donna for your sweet touch |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No doubt, your creative pen is constantly and beautifully inspired, dear D.! "Gata in pen shiver gowns" ... even the title alone leaves me speechless. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend for that sweet touch |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
well?does your pen still want?! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
and you would roll them into moments and wrap them with smile strings then put them there in that place you go for some other later on time and where is that place where one smiles at the wrong moment and crys right on time??? ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your pen flows perfectly....well done sir daark. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..but of course my dear...thanks babe ____________________ ms angel, thank you so much fair lady for the touch ___________________ sire magnus, you bless me poet..thank you so much |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I, for one, am ecstatic that you have an insatiable pen. A |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you sweet lady ________________ ms greeneyes...you make everything lovely, thank you babe |
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