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It was then....
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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It was then precisely then when you held me close dancing naked together alone and when you looked in my eyes and held my gaze for a moment in time that me being me fell for you being you and it felt so right it felt so right Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roniece~ *smiles* ... gal friend ... Iffen you be dancing nekkid with a guy Lord knows ya' best be falling for him~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
LOL!!! ah Marge, I have so missed you my friend! and I have just learned a new word... 'nekkid' !!! LOL!! thank you! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b...it was a guy yes? lol...very sexy ms!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ooh Mr Daark... I could have so much fun with my response to you!....but decorum doesn't allow me.... LOL! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Roniece, I love your sharing of this hot dance and the falling into each other, which is truly a magical moment. "Nekkidness" is charming  Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, This paints a lovely picture. What music were you dancing to? Love the idea here. Love Bobby |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very nice! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I could have written this....BUT....mine would not have been so deliciously nice to read. |
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ChrisTonner Junior Member
since 2008-08-06
Posts 24 |
Very nice, inspiring. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Oh my! lol  ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love it when it "feels so right".... could even see it feeling that way... K O O L write, my friend! j. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
What a tender sexy post dear Roniece and what a lucky fellow he woild be, love Lindsay |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's pretty~ 'tis a beautiful moment you wrote~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Fine mix of realism and romanticism! serious applause!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
as the "feelin' so right'" is struggling to leave my old body behind, I'm still feelin' so right right down at the end of my little toe, just past the end of the nail ....Oh! That's the ground. Now how did I miss that? Man, I been feeling so right after reading this again I was even feeking right after the right feeling had dropped off the host... damn, that is feeling good!!! loved it again, my friend.... j. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
LOL! @ Jimbo!! you are so funny with your lovely response! x Thank you everyone, I really appreciate each one of you for taking time to read my work... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi RDB, lucky guy indeed he should be. |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
This struck me the most of all of your poems. A lovely moment captured in time. "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
This is wonderful! It’s so lyrical when said aloud. dancing naked is never....ever...a bad thing. =) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sizzle...now I would ask if dancing naked is an Aussie thing...but I would sound so naive beautiful, descriptive write...enjoyed |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
So romantic, your "then precisely then," it grabbed me as a reader, and "it felt so right." *wink* "that me being me fell for you being you" I really adored those lines, so satisfying for they speak volumes. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Dang woman!  this puts me in the mood for loooooove ;-) Lovely as usual! The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
delicious and hot, yann |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"dancing naked together alone" oh Roniece this is at once profound and playful... perfect too! "it felt so right" |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
How did I ever miss this one, Roniece? You gotta grab me sometimes and pull me to your poetry. I love this and am saving it. It's - no, you are beautiful. xoxoxo Ali |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you all... your comments are heartwarming to my soul ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful reminisce! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce - tender thoughts, and so well put into words... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
WOW! I like the way you wrote this. Very, uh hmmmmm. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Awww, this is too good to be buried too soon. Love ya, girly. |
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