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MovesInSilence
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0 posted 2008-08-10 04:51 AM


Nature of the beast

It flows silent through rivers of red
Causing chaos, havoc and balance
It brings emotional highs and lows
Remove its gentle kiss and the world ends

It flows silent through my rivers of red
Bringing me chaos, havoc and balance
Giving me emotional highs and lows
For me the gentle kiss provides life

Each passing month the clock ticks
Each passing month changes are made
Each passing month I am alive but on hold
Each passing month could be my last

Life before was dark and uncertain
Life with is getting brighter and bearable
Life with the beast is killing me slowly
Life without the beast is empty

I dance with the beast every day
I know the risks and what can happen
The music plays and we dance
No moonlight no magic just dance


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1 posted 2008-08-10 06:09 AM


Lina~
An intriguing read ... poetic thoughts of ponder~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Margherita
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2 posted 2008-08-10 10:26 AM


Looks like a dangerous dance, lacking its most desirable ingredient: love and joy.

Whatever form or nature this beast has, I think you would be much better off dancing alone WITH moonlight, the magic will follow ...

You have conveyed your message well.

Love,
Margherita

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